tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4677656433774493646.post1491489252718190090..comments2023-05-17T01:03:11.834-07:00Comments on Diary of Bones: NaNoWriMo, Day 12: a quickieArcher's Boneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15507043334472692421noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4677656433774493646.post-74904659225776360272013-11-14T10:40:23.829-07:002013-11-14T10:40:23.829-07:00Very visual. You've painted a clear scene and...Very visual. You've painted a clear scene and I like the momentum. There's no superfluous text or over explaining to bog down what you're showing. A really good excerpt. Keep it up! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com